Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Change (money)
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Change (as in money)[edit source]
| Humour: | 4 | I'm not going to beat around the bush: basically, it's not very funny. The idea behind it is clever, but the actual jokes range from baffling to potentially good, but badly told. Also, I know a lot of Uncyc pages have tons of quotes; please don't think that this is mandatory. They rarely add much. |
| Concept: | 7 | I really liked the idea. The idea of change as an addiction has potential. What I think you need is a little more direction. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Not bad, but not great. Mostly readable, it becomes a little awkward in places. Please don't use multiple exclamation marks. The only time that is acceptable is when you're making fun of people who use multiple question marks. Also, use Wiki markup to emphasize words instead of using ALLCAPS. You only need one space between paragraphs. I've cleaned it up a little, but it probably still needs some work. |
| Images: | 7 | There's only one picture, and it's not very interesting. But I'm giving it a good mark because the caption is the best gag in the article. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | This article has potential, it just needs a little direction and a little fleshing out. |
| Final Score: | 28 | Read some humour writing - not just on this site, read other comedy sites, comedy books, articles, comics even. Think about what makes these things funny. Take what you've learned from this exercise and use it. |
| Reviewer: | --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 02:43, 14 June 2007 (UTC) | |