User talk:Feebas factor/Uchiha Itachi

This time I'll do it right...

Well, I've attempted to recreate this article, except this time following a wiser procedure and bringing constructive criticism to the article before it gets found and deleted off the bat. If the Kakashi and Sasuke articles are fine, there shouldn't be anything inherently wrong with one on Itachi.

I've also tried to address some of the issues "raised" before deletion last time:

• Pictures: Added one picture which seemed suitable. I'm not sure if there are any other Itachi pics that'd be funny, if so they're a welcome addition.
• Jokes: I thought there was some good, funny stuff in there... not much I can do, though, that's subjective.
• Format: I split the paragraphs into more readable chunks and added headings.
• Comprehensiblity to non-manga readers: I replaced most japanese names (except the sex parodies) and explained a bit more in detail. But evidently it is oriented primarily at those who have at least a basic grasp of the series.
• Content: I balanced out the content a little more by expanding beyond just "the story".

BTW, I do not take credit for the original idea.

So, anyone have any ideas? Don't feel obliged if you couldn't care less about naruto or anime. I'd just rather not see this thing so quickly dropped in VFD again without so much as a sentence improved.

Feebas factor 02:08, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

Turns out that Kakashi page wasn't fine and Sasuke page was deleted. How do you propose to this? Reinn 06:43, 9 June 2007 (UTC)

I guess there isn't really a place for individual anime characters after all... I'm content at least that there's no longer a double standard. Feebas factor 16:16, 9 June 2007 (UTC)