User:Uncyclopedian/PLSpoints

Humor: 5/10: Meh. In-jokes are overused, a few basic jokes are in the article, common jokes. Template at top lowers the score by 1 point.
Grammar, Formatting, and Spelling: 1/3: Well formatted, but grammar is a big problem.
Completeness: 3/5: You completed it, but did not go in very much detail.
Images: 4/5: Good images were used well.
Correct Alternate Namespace: Check.
Total: 13/23

Humor: 7/10: Funny.
Grammar, Formatting, and Spelling: 2/3: Grammar is good, spelling is good, but formatting is not too great. Took a bit of time for me to tell between the actions and the speech at a glance.
Completeness: 4/5: I would like to see the script continue after where it ends.
Images: 3/5: Adequately illustrated for the size of the script, and the theme, but not too funny when it comes to the image.
Correct Alternate Namespace: Check.
Total: 16/23

Humor: 6/10: Made me chuckle a bit, but not really the type of UnBook I like. I don't really understand the main joke, though.
Grammar, Formatting, and Spelling: 3/3: Check, check, and check.
Completeness: 5/5: A complete UnBook, as far as I think it would go.
Images: 4/5: The images made me chuckle. Nice use of the piano music.
Correct Alternate Namespace: Check.
Total: 18/23

Humor: 7/10: Heh. Funny ideas. I could probably use a few of those.
Grammar, Formatting, and Spelling: 1/3: Grammar and formatting have a few problems.
Completeness: 4/5: Good, but you could expand it a bit more. A few sections could use a bit more content.
Images: 0/5: No images.
Correct Alternate Namespace: Check.
Total: 12/23

Humor: 7/10: Overuses the word fuck, but the title and a few parts of the article made me crack up.
Grammar, Formatting, and Spelling: 2/3: The cover messes up the formatting.
Completeness: 5/5: Complete.
Images: 4/5: The images are good.
Correct Alternate Namespace: Check.
Total: 18/23

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