Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/releasimification
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releasimification[edit source]
This a new article created by me. It was suggested by another user that I write some new material, and here is the beginning of it. So, am i going in the right direction with this one? thanks. -bobofosho
Bobofosho 00:02, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 3 | I don't get it - it comes across more as casual racism than any insightful wit. And what is it - I sense you've got a concept which is (potentially) funny, but it's difficult to describe. |
| Concept: | 3 | See above. Could be a reasonable concept, but it doesn't seem to have any basis in reality or 'ting. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | It's an early draft, so I'll be generous. Maybe make the article more encyclopedic - intro, description, history, etc etc. I'd also try and use fewer brackets; rather, make those comments part of the text as they are relevant. |
| Images: | 0 | No images |
| Miscellaneous: | 3.7 | |
| Final Score: | 14.7 | I don't really get it, I'm afraid, but then maybe I'm being too damn British. Maybe try again once some time has been put into planning and writing the article. |
| Reviewer: | Gladstone 15:52, 6 June 2008 (UTC) | |