Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/how to:kill a witch

HowTo:kill a witch

japanesefreak 13:35, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	1	Okay. Welcome to Uncyclopedia, japanesefreak. I don't care about my reviews being in-depth, so I'll get right to the point: This article is not funny. It was obviously rushed and thoughtless, and doesn't give the reader any real information on how to kill a witch. I am new to the wiki myself, and don't let this get you down, every new user's articles are bad at first. My reccomendation is you read HTBFANJS, it will give you a good idea of how to write articles that people consider "good."
Concept:	2.5	2 points for a decent concept that could possibly be made into something wonderful. .5 points for execution. See above.
Prose and formatting:	0.5	About as close to no prose as I think is possible. Almost every word is mispelled, It is written in lowercase, and the overall jumble of the words is awful. There is also almost no links whatsoever. However, it is very easy to fix. If you would like me to help, you you can ask me. I would be more than willing to help you. Oh, and get your name out of the article too.
Images:	0	No images. I cannot think of any that would be particularly hilarious either, with the approach you took.
Miscellaneous:	1	My overall grade of the article.
Final Score:	5	I would, if I were you, probably rewrite the whole thing. I would also take a different viewpoint, like that of some wacky kid talking about his way of killing witches, like with orange juice or something. If you have any questions feel free to ask me at my talk page.
Reviewer:	It's Me Bitches! Don't worry, I won't kill you.