Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Your Computer Has Crashed
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Your Computer Has Crashed[edit source]
Captain Nerd 20:37, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
Made it in 20 minutes, based on a real BSoD, my second article, please comment on my my userpage after you review it
| Humour: | 8 | Got some quick laughs from it. Nothing to really say here. |
| Concept: | 7 | Microsoft bashing. Love it. I can believe that it was based on a real BSoD. The problem with it is it doesn't leave much room for expansion, which hurts your score. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | It looks good. It is written seriously with funny content, and that gets good results. |
| Images: | 6 | You don't have any images. I suppose images don't really apply here, so I'm averaging your scores and then taking a little off. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | The problem is, this is too short to be considered a truly great article. I understand that there isn't much room for expansion here, but that's really the trade-off you get for writing an article with this kind of content. |
| Final Score: | 34 | It's a good quickie. I think that's all it's ever really going to be. If you expand it too much, you'll probably ruin it's charm. As I said before, it's a trade-off. |
| Reviewer: | -- Aethix ~ Talk|Contributions|My project  23:32, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
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