Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/World War XXI

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World War XXI[edit source]

Well, hey, I made my first article on Uncyclopedia. I know I have a terrible sense of humor and that this article could use some improvements so I'm asking for a Pee Review. EDIT:Put homor instead of humor >.< --156.34.12.107 22:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC) 156.34.12.107 22:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

Well, somebody could review it for you in a week if your link isn't broken by then.
I can't beleive Jasper Ain't dead yet! I'm happy too, sire. DR2 ASA or Nutella? Decide. Talk to meh. 23:14, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
Humour: 10 Excellent
Concept: 10 Great alternative history, future history!
Prose and formatting: 9 Corrected errors, watch those typos, but all A-OK man!
Images: 10 Damn good artwork. I'm a artist in real life.
Miscellaneous: 10 Really good work. Keep it up.
Final Score: 49 THAT IS A GREAT MASTERPIECE !!!!
Reviewer: Alien Hunter 00:11, 11 June 2008 (UTC)