Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/World War XXI
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World War XXI[edit source]
Well, hey, I made my first article on Uncyclopedia. I know I have a terrible sense of humor and that this article could use some improvements so I'm asking for a Pee Review. EDIT:Put homor instead of humor >.< --156.34.12.107 22:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC) 156.34.12.107 22:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
- Well, somebody could review it for you in a week if your link isn't broken by then.
- This is
Avril Lavigne'sDJ Jasper's signature. ProfileTalkASA 23:14, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 10 | Excellent |
| Concept: | 10 | Great alternative history, future history! |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Corrected errors, watch those typos, but all A-OK man! |
| Images: | 10 | Damn good artwork. I'm a artist in real life. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Really good work. Keep it up. |
| Final Score: | 49 | THAT IS A GREAT MASTERPIECE !!!! |
| Reviewer: | Alien Hunter 00:11, 11 June 2008 (UTC) | |