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Voted Sexiest Person Alive[edit source]
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Entering first comments
23:47, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | needs more of a kick to it in my opinion |
| Concept: | 4 | It's quite cliche tbh, but still might be worth expanding |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | It needs a lot of work, maybe the article could be in a more magazine-like style |
| Images: | 7 | The image is alright, but atm it makes the rest of the article unimportant |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | way too short, it doesn't really develop |
| Final Score: | 25 | it could gain some strength, moving the focus to the username gag to make it more a parody of silly magazine awards |
| Reviewer: | --SonOfPhyllis 23:57, June 7, 2010 (UTC) | |