Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Bhind45Malcolm in the Middle
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User:Bhind45/Malcolm in the Middle[edit source]
Bhind45 05:05, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | Made me chuckle sometimes, but too much stupidness, and swearing. It wasn't at all clever, exept for the Neil Patrick Harris thing. |
| Concept: | 8 | Funny concept, but could use some developing. Focus more on how Lois is probably the most annoying character on T.V. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Lots of misspellings, and did not flow well. Very good formatting though. |
| Images: | 9 | Good, funny images |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Not really any miscellaneous |
| Final Score: | 37 | Overall, this was lacking in everything except for pictures and concept. I would suggest spending more time on it, and getting more ideas from other people. |
| Reviewer: | --Jim C. Thomas 02:13, June 14, 2011 (UTC) | |