Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Europe invades the iPhone
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UnNews:Europe invades the iPhone[edit source]
Might need pictures, might not. Anyway, any criticism would be helpful--TimJohN 00:56, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
- Added a pic I made. hope it makes it a bit better.--TimJohN 01:32, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
Got it. -Razorflame (contributions) Talk 01:02, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
- GREAT review, btw - • <-> 02:03, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
Humour: | 7.8 | Good for the most part. In the first half, it needs work. In the second half, it works.
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Concept: | 9.3 | Very good content for the most part.
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Prose and formatting: | 8.3 | Good prose, but I get lost while reading it a bit.
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Images: | 0 | No images. Not good. This article would be MUCH funnier if it had images. |
Miscellaneous: | 6.4 | Average of 4 scores above. |
Final Score: | 31.8 | Fix the areas that I have detailed above. This is a very nice concept and article, just needs a few kinks to be worked out. |
Reviewer: | -Razorflame (contributions) Talk 01:19, 11 November 2007 (UTC) |