Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Britney Spears Yawns
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UnNews:Britney Spears Yawns[edit source]
Taco Wiz 01:23, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 3 | The article is not very funny. I saw how you put up the Miley Cirus Sneezes one for vfd, but that one is actually more funny than this one. This one one was pretty lame. In fact, I would reccomend how to be funny and not just stupid. |
| Concept: | 1 | The concept is weak. It is a total copy of The Miley Cirus one. The unorginality is not good. I just got a whiplash from that myself. SO you need to come up with real ideas, not copy other ones. |
| Prose and formatting: | 3 | The article is short. Two small pargraphs of sour content. I mean, there is a lot more room for jokes and stuff, but still the article would be bad. And, many people often italicize quotes so they are easier for readers to indentify. |
| Images: | 3 | The images were some old images of Britney. And there was absolutely nothing funny about them, not to mention the fact that she isn't even yawning in te picture. To make an article good, you need some good pictures. |
| Miscellaneous: | 2 | Below Average |
| Final Score: | 12 | This article is pretty bad. I would nom this for VFD myself, but UnNewses don't deserve it. It definitely does not belong "in the news" so it will be gone shortly. This article is just a bad idea with bad content. I'm sorry, but that's the way it is. |
| Reviewer: | ~ Readmesoon | |