Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/The Al Pacino Academy of Shouting
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The Al Pacino Academy of Shouting[edit source]
Matfen815 20:32, October 5, 2009 (UTC)
Hey! My initial impression is that this is a fairly good article. first impression score of about 40-45. I don't have the time right now to do a full review, but I thought I'd go ahead and let you know that i really liked what I had read so far.
Skinfan13 15:50, October 15, 2009 (UTC)
Thnx, am happy to hear it! No rush on it, as it is quite long. Thnx again. --Matfen815 15:55, October 15, 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | This is really good stuff! I love the warning and picture at the beginning, classic. The last half of the article is the funniest to me, I particularly like the instructors and notable alumni page. |
| Concept: | 9 | This is creative as well as funny. Mostly I really don't like it when an article and content are pretty much just someones idea (I'm guilt of that though lol) because the end result is pitiful, but you did a really good job here of creafting the fiction and including the references. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | well, it's not very encyclopedic, but I really don't think that's a problem for the entry, it definitely stands on its own two legs otherwise. |
| Images: | 10 | I will actually say that your use of images could not get any better at this point. The choices are excellent and the captions are funny. anything more would be clutter and anything less wouldn't be as funny. (this is the first ten I've given btw) |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | This should make up for the formatting score. This is an article that i think needs very little added to or taken away from. |
| Final Score: | 43 | Excellent article, keep it up! |
| Reviewer: | Skinfan13 21:40, October 15, 2009 (UTC) | |