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Technobabble[edit source]
God, another article up for review that will just sit here forever and ever? Please review it, and be specific about how to improve it. • <-> 03:55, Nov 15
- You've gotten 3 reviews on this article....stoppit! My head hurts! -Razorflame
(contributions) Talk 03:58, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
- Yeah, but they were dumb reviews. It needs actual advice. Also, I've seen articles get reviewed 5 times before they were okay. • <-> 04:02, Nov 15
| Humour: | 8.5 | My favorite part was the countdown sequence at the end. Excellent mockery of cliche sci-fi situations. |
| Concept: | 9 | Finally, somewhere I can turn to when my spaceship malfunctions! |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | It could just be that things like 'ya' 'gonna' 'kinda' bug me, but otherwise it worked really well. I approve. |
| Images: | 7 | All the will-robinsoning was okay, but it could be replaced by something better. Other than that, good job here, too. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Needs more outwards links, it's true. Should be easy enough to get around to, amirite? And you'd probably be better off with a different title for the article as a whole. |
| Final Score: | 37.5 | It's good, it's a keeper, just give it some links to get it out of that mean old Dead End category. |
| Reviewer: | --Komodo Gallant 03:10, 21 November 2007 (UTC) | |