Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Tattaglia
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Tattaglia[edit source]
Tattaglia 07:36, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
No, I didn't find your article funny. Is this your personal biography? Its even far from the Tattaglia we know of in The Godfather. --Kapuso 09:39, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
- Kapuso, this is hardly a review. Either review it or refrain from remarking here. You can do it on the article talk page. ~
17:04, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
- Kapuso, this is hardly a review. Either review it or refrain from remarking here. You can do it on the article talk page. ~
I'm already typing a review about this article before you replied. --Kapuso 17:15, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 1 | Its not funny and is full of random. |
| Concept: | 1 | This is basically all about a "silly" biography of a "four and three-quarters years old". It would be funnier if the ideas within this article would be consistent to each other and related to the title of this article called "Tattaglia". |
| Prose and formatting: | 1 | Since I see a linear path for this article, it should be considered a narrative rather than an encyclopedic text. Better start by stating the facts about "Tattaglia" and put it in the article and start playing with it. |
| Images: | 3 | The images can be funny when used as standalone, but it would be better if these images are consistent with one another and be related as much as possible with the "Tattaglia". I advise a little bit of research on Tattaglia first before starting this article. |
| Miscellaneous: | 1 | The content of this article should be based on a realistic concept called "Tattaglia". |
| Final Score: | 7 | Deletion or ICU recommended and absolute revision of the article. |
| Reviewer: | --Kapuso 17:12, 2 March 2008 (UTC) | |