Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Sexassin
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Sexassin[edit source]
Conjizzys 20:07, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | From right out of the gate this gives me almost nothing to go on. There just really isn't anything funny going on here. |
| Concept: | 6.5 | With some work this concept could go places, but you have to find a way to make me laugh at sexual harassment basically and that requires a high skill of writing. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | You have a lot of grammar mistakes I do it too. |
| Images: | 3 | Bland. |
| Miscellaneous: | 2 | Those quotes are lame and predictable especially get rid of that awful Chuck Norris quote. |
| Final Score: | 21.5 | This is an okay premise but is poorly executed. You do nothing exciting with it, your images are lame there is just nothing going on to make me laugh or care about this article. Sorry, go back to square one. |
| Reviewer: | --Dr. Fenwick 23:11, 15 May 2008 (UTC) | |