Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Otto Weininger(rewrite)
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Otto Weininger(rewrite)[edit source]
84.250.123.208 15:46, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | The humour is mostly random. I may not get some of it because I hadn't heard of Weininger before, but meh. |
| Concept: | 7 | Could be more uniform. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Pretty good. |
| Images: | 8 | The first few images are good, but the last one is really funny. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | The promiscuity is funny. |
| Final Score: | 36 | Overall, kinda good. Starts off strong but then gets random at the end. Could end more strongely. |
| Reviewer: | The fatgoat Talk (to me, obviously) The Crap I've Done 19:34, 11 April 2008 (UTC) | |
I would have thought the humour was far from random, but on the other hand, it's very arbitrary, as it pretty much follows every sentence from the Wikipedia article. I don't know how to avoid this without becoming random. I hope I could make an article appeal to everyone, regardless if one has heard of the subject or not. Just idealism?
Do you think I would be better off if I just stated that "Otto Weininger was a philosopher" instead of "floor-mopper and founder of NAMBLA"? 84.250.123.208 15:23, 12 April 2008 (UTC)Author
- It could work to combine both, so that it's "Otto Weininger was a philosopher who is better known as a floor-mopper and the founder of NAMBLA" or something like that It might be better to resubmit the article to Pee Review and get someone else to review it, since I probably shouldn't have ventured here since I'm not very experienced at this sort of thing and thus not very helpful. -- The fatgoat Talk (to me, obviously) The Crap I've Done 21:29, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
- Nah, I'll have plenty of more articles coming to submit. Your comments point me to the right direction. Thanks. 84.250.123.208 21:57, 12 April 2008 (UTC)Author