Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Not A Grue
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Not A Grue[edit source]
Captain Nerd 20:22, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
Don't worry. I know this one is a piece of crap, so feel free to tell me that.
| Humour: | 7 | The beginning was kind of stupid, but it got better later on. I particularly liked the part where the guy got control over the TV remote. That is a good example of random humor that works. It's a good joke, but the execution needs work. The jokes in the list are kind of funny, but they have been done before. |
| Concept: | 8 | This is actually kind of original. You have really taken overdone Grue jokes in a new direction. Still, "not a grue" is a little strange. It kind of works. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | You have a brief block of text and a list. Maybe you should and a {{WIP}} tag to protect it while you expand it, because someone is probably going to try to vote it for deletion. Maybe you could break up the introduction into two or three smaller paragraphs. |
| Images: | 2 | You have no images--bad. You have no images that are complete garbage--good, but not good enough to offset the bad. |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | It is too short, and needs some serious expansion. |
| Final Score: | 26 | Yes, it is kind of crappy, but it has potential. Work on it some more, clean it up, and develop it. |
| Reviewer: | -- Aethix ~ Talk|Contributions|My project  23:52, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
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