Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Necro-Deth Cannibals from Hell
Necro-Deth Cannibals from Hell[edit source]
My brother and I have run low on ideas for ways to add to this. We plan to have them go on tour over the summer, but past that... Larrythefunkyferret 07:09, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
Necro-Deth Cannibals from Hell was a children's television program from the Ukraine that was cancelled during the summer of 2003. The show featured a small, lovable character named Pee-Wee who was a Necro-Deth Cannibal. Pee-Wee had various adventures helping and eating people while trying to find his way back to his home, Hell. The show was unusually gory for a children's show, but was buoyed through the sale of numerous merchandise including "When I finish this apple puree your next bitch" childrens T-shirts.
The show was cancelled as it seemed to be infringing the copyright of Seinfeld, with story lines including "the contest", "the puffy shirt", "Jon Voights car" and so on.
The shows creators have re-invented themselves and hope to tour this coming summer. But past that....
| Humour: | 5 | Well honestly, I didn't laugh. I know that this is just follow the HTBFANJS guide to the letter, and I can see this. However, I did come close to laughing once. But that's it. Only once. For the record, it was "I think our main musical influence is the beatles. 'Really?' WE COME FROM HELL" part. But most of the article isn't funny. There are moments, however, where it elevates to "Oh, that's chuckle-worthy", but this is not often. |
| Concept: | 4 | This article is done about a metal band, not any Ukrainian TV show. If you wanted to write this kind of article, maybe you should've chosen a HARDCORE metal band, like Slipknot. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Above average prose and formatting. Just a standard article in this case. Not really much you can do to improve this. |
| Images: | 2 | MS painting over a fat guy, a GIF of a skull for one of the band members and that overused head explosion DO NOT make for good pictures. Those guys with blood on their mouths don't really either. |
| Miscellaneous: | 4.5 | As you can see, this is not our best article. It's really not that great, and if it hadn't been put in Pee Review already, I would've slapped a {{Rewrite/Soft}} straight onto it. I'm really not sure how to improve it because the concept wasn't that great. |
| Final Score: | 22.5 | Well, not too helpful a review I'm aware, but I hope it did help slightly. |
| Reviewer: | --Reverse Genocide Cockatrices 05:56, November 27, 2009 (UTC) | |