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My First Pubic Hair[edit source]
My 2nd article. While reading it, please keep in mind that I am only 11. Don't you love Lady GaGa? She makes the best songs! --LongLiverh3 05:56, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
05:56, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | Pretty funny, everyone should be able to relate to it.
It obvisouly isn't a story about you personally, but any author that says he hates his dad isnt funny. |
| Concept: | 5 | It was a good idea to begin with. But the diary entry isn't fun to read |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Your mistaking this website for LiveJournal.
Easy to follow |
| Images: | 7 | The only redeeming feature, bertha is "HOT" |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Where are the pictures of the french babes? |
| Final Score: | 27 | Alittle bit more time can go along way.
Written by an 11 year old, perhaps for an 11 year old. Still it had its moments |
| Reviewer: | --Addys 08:39, 27 May 2009 (UTC) | |