Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Lucky Star
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Lucky Star[edit source]
| Humour: | 5 | I don't see much humor, which is probably why it was tagged with ICU, so you should probably read this for more info, that link really helps. |
| Concept: | 3 | Lists usually don't work well, see my further comments, and it shouldn't just be a description of the characters but it should probably describe things the characters do instead of there description. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | Lists tend not to work out very well, you should see UN:LIST for more details about why lists. Side affects usually don't work out so well, because they have been done so many times before so I'd reccomend removing the side affects. I'm not good with grammar, so just to be safe, put {{Proofread}} at the bottom of your article |
| Images: | 9 | These fit in with the article, good |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | YouTube vidoes usually don't work out well, as severeal people don't have sound on there computer and they won't understand the joke. Articles such as Dirty Potter have been deleted because of this reason, and so you should make it so it written out instead on video. |
| Final Score: | 26 | You're off to a good start JoeM007. Take a look at this and the other links, and this peice will be fine. Once you think you're done, you should resumbit this to Pee Review. It's a good thing you submitted to Pee Review, and I was going to reccomend getting this Pee Reviewed on your talk page. This has a lot of potential, good luck! |
| Reviewer: | --Sir Manforman  13:37, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
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