Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Jutsu
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Jutsu[edit source]
Alright, this is my second full article. I am a bit more confident in this one, but there are still no images. When you're my hieght living in a house made for midgets, you're likely to develope a severe fear of ceiling fans. 13:39, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
I made a review and i hope you'll like it. --LOLsupreme 13:25, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | It's a bit humorous but it needs more.Some people could be bored,and only naruto fans will understand what you are saying(and they could be bored).Some images would help. |
| Concept: | 5 | You are saying random things that are a bit funny at the first look but then... .You need real jokes. |
| Prose and formatting: | 3 | The article is very short,you should really consider making it longer(or being an article improver). |
| Images: | 0 | The article really needs images! |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | The article is boring,not too boring,but still. |
| Final Score: | 17 | Hope this review helped you. |
| Reviewer: | --LOLsupreme 13:19, 4 July 2008 (UTC) | |