Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Benchmark your computer
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A simple HowTo I did. This is my first HowTo and I want to know if I'm on the right track or if it's just too stupid.
HowTo:Benchmark your computer[edit source]
Take Two. --NXWave 15:27, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
- Much much better. A+ • <-> Jan 7 (16:08)
| Humour: | 4 | The humor is all over the place, It's a little thing we'd like to call random humor. Well, Since you're new. I might as well aid you, What I was thinking is that I want to see something parody benchmarking. You know, running apps to test the performance and stuff, yeah. Might I suggest you take a look at the world of Tech, cause I want you to discover benchmarking for yourself. |
| Concept: | 6 | It's a great concept but it would help if you knew what you were writing about. |
| Prose and formatting: | 2 | This seems too basic, there's no introductory sentence and it begins with a disclaimer. Then it goes on to 7 headers with almost one line/sentence each. I really want you to expand your writing skills. That's why you should read this. |
| Images: | 5 | It seems that the images are corrosponding and random at best. Be ready to have images that relate to the subject. |
| Miscellaneous: | 4.3 | Averaged. |
| Final Score: | 21.3 | I really want you to succeed, your article has potential but you can create it, you and you alone have the thoughts. I wouldn't want to interfere with the process would I and also there are people that can help you, by offering yourself to the Adopt-A-Noob foundation. You and you alone can really become a functioning member of society. That's all I have to say, Good luck. |
| Reviewer: | NXWave 15:27, 7 January 2008 (UTC) | |
Thanks a bunch for your review, I do actually know quite a bit about computers but couldn't think of anything to parody what you actually do to benchmark. I'm going to give it some thought and give it a rewrite...--Blink 15:01, 9 January 2008 (UTC)