Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Grand Theft Auto: Mercenaries of England
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Grand Theft Auto: Mercenaries of England[edit source]
Thomasfan666 14:42, 16 June 2009 (UTC) Grand Theft Auto: Mercenaries Of England
| Humour: | 1 | Hi Thomasfan666, and welcome again to Uncyclopedia. I gave you a 1 for humour because your article is not funny. The plot is ridiculous but not comical, the characters are seemingly random but boring people, and the following lists are tedious and aimless. I noticed from your user page that your name happens to be "Jack Myall", who is also the protagonist of the piece. This leads me to believe that this article is a vanity page: that is, a page about you or your friends, that only you and your friends find funny. This type of page is not allowed on this wiki, for the reason that humour has to be generally understood by a large group of people to be funny. Otherwise, it's just stupidity. |
| Concept: | 1 | As you can see from the template you added to your article, there is a multitude of GTA-in-a-hilarious-location articles on this wiki. The concept for all of these articles is very self-explanatory and does not really vary much. There is no scope for writing a successful GTA article in this format. I recommend that you abandon this project, if it is not first deleted. |
| Prose and formatting: | 3 | More readable than some articles, but needs a lot of improvement. Multiple red-links (pages that have not yet been created) are a no-no; proper capitalisation and punctuation is a must if you seriously want your article read. Articles with long lists are normally ugly and the lists themselves are pointless. |
| Images: | 2 | The images aren't terrible, but add nothing to the article. They are not even vaguely related to the plot or characters. |
| Miscellaneous: | 2 | Not a good article. |
| Final Score: | 9 | Okay, so on your talk page there is a welcome message that has a bunch of helpful links in it. These are the top three:
The last one is Adopt A Noob, where an experienced Uncyclopedian will take you under his/his/his/her wing and teach you the ways of the wiki. You probably won't just stumble into writing good articles without some help; click the links and see what happens! Good luck. |
| Reviewer: | IronLung 11:59, 17 June 2009 (UTC) | |