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Crazy Old Man

Faramir, son of Denethor 19:30, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	6	Not bad, very person to person view. But try not to keep saying things in a first person's point of view like "I can't even shoot him". You should say "Not even the great Faramir can shoot him!" or something like that.
Concept:	7	Good article, can be improved. Maybe with the help of several great users like Socky or Sysrq, the article can become GA or FA. Has a lot of potential. And the infobox content is unique :) Get more content. Maybe add fans of him or something like that.
Prose and formatting:	4	Quotes- I don't think you should keep posting "quoted replies" to quotes. Maybe the second quote by the old man. Infobox - A bit messy. Don't include the picture caption. Maybe use <code>|image name=Crazy Old Man.jpg</code> instead of | image name=[[Crazy Old Man.jpg]] Links:Actually, instead of just adding [[Link Name]], you can add this: [[Link Name|What will be shown in article]] . Also link more things. Make it look better. Section Title- You shouldn't include all Capital letters in all the section titles. Maybe one or two is fine, but all? Remove some of them. And I don't think you should put a line under the section. It makes the article look weird. Also, for the "sub-sections" you can use ===Names and Nicknames=== instead of '''Names and Nicknames:'''
Images:	5.5	Nice pictures, but maybe you can get more pictures. More relevant pictures. Which have more to do with the content. And you also don't need to have it all from the show/game or whatever this guy's from. Or take a photo of just an old man. Or Nostradamus ;).
Miscellaneous:	5.5	I'll use the average. It's so hard to count with a point 5.
Final Score:	28	I am so lenient. But send this for another pee after improving everything.
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