UnScripts talk:A Comedy of Grammaretical Errors
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Uh-hu hu huh. Coyel. -- Hindleyite Converse • ?pedia 11:17, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit source]
Probably not my best work, and certainly not my worst, but it's got its parts. I hope that you can help me improve upon it. --~
Jacques Pirat, Esq. Converse : Benefactions : U.w.p.
22:26, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
Humour: | 8 | This is preposterous. Ridiculous. Utterly absurd. In other words, quite nice really. |
Concept: | 8 | Well....a comedy of grammatical errors is a good concept. I like it. This is a little underdeveloped, though. |
Prose and formatting: | 8 | Well-writhed. |
Images: | 7 | Images are appropriate. |
Miscellaneous: | 8 | This is of course a piece after my own heart. Or at least my deuce of hearts, which is the only one left. In my left ventricle, that is. Of my heart. |
Final Score: | 39 | |
Reviewer: | ----OEJ 23:37, 5 May 2007 (UTC) |
I would be honored to work upon this a bit, if I may. ----OEJ 23:37, 5 May 2007 (UTC)