UnNews talk:Man has perfect day award revoked after kitten abuse.

This is my first ever article so i would like some feed back please.

Very good for a first article. The concept itself is very good, so you're getting the tricky bit right.

You need to focus now on the easy things, like not using all the standard fallbacks of Oscar Wilde / Kanye West / kitten huffing / Steve Ballmer / Chuck Norris / etc., or if you do use them, making them sufficiently different ("Found 3 previously unused Oscar Wilde quotes" was actually quite a good one). The grammar is a bit shaky in places, too, but again that's easy enough to solve.