UnNews talk:Jolie to paint rainbow family
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....This article needs some care--Safteysalamander 22:47, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
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UnNews:Jolie to paint rainbow family[edit source]
Greetings! I have come with bad tidings. A.K.A. This article. Anything from anyone would be appreciated. {Ikabu}BUZZ...FLICK...GURGLE... 11:26, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | Can't honestly say I laughed, even to myself. Random gay jokes do not a good article make. |
| Concept: | 3 | Jolie adoption jokes are the new Bill Clinton blowjob jokes. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | Not very newslike. |
| Images: | 3 | It's possible to make untouched images funny with well-written captions, but in this case the captions aren't funny. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Manages to keep total retardation to a minimum |
| Final Score: | 19 | There's probably nothing that can make this article better since the concept is terrible to begin with. You've got some work to do as a writer, but keep trying. |
| Reviewer: | --  16:31, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
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