UnBooks talk:Desire

Tip: If you read again after knowing the ending, you'll notice lots of foreshadowing and extra hilarious content!

This is a highly experimental side-project I wrote in 5 days, and I'm not even sure about the title because the article is such an amorphous anticlimactic mess. Please guide me with your comments, edits, and criticism. EmulsifiedExcuse (talk)

Update: Thanks for the corrections. Oh, that comic strip was so surprisingly apt in many ways that I laughed myself to tears. It is enriching to conversate with you all, even considering my garbagey English!