UnBooks talk:Bill Cosby, the Autobiography
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Just seeing if I have to fix anything...I know, no links, sorry...didn't have the time
| Humour: | 8 | It definitely makes me smile. I like the way the subject of the next sentence is worked in, before then addressing it. I like the format. I guess the "I DIDN'T RAPE ANYBONE, MOTHERFUCKER" line is deliberately a contrast. This didn't work for me. I think it should have been worked in using the style of the rest of the article, with maybe a shocking end to the sentence. |
| Concept: | 9 | Great concept. And using the style of the Cosby delivery works brilliantly for me. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | The language flows really well and I can hear Cosby saying the words in my head. Tell him to stop! Is a little bit ugly looking though. Big clumps of test and massive paragraphs. |
| Images: | 4 | The "Me and my lovely wife" one made me smile. But the rest just seem thrown in to match what you've said in the text with relitively weak captions below. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | The structure of the article covers major parts of his life. I would have liked to have seen a bit more bitterness from Cosby. Maybe lamenting the fact that he didn't enjoy so much success in his move career and slagging off people he blames for things that have gone wrong. Needs some links adding as you have indicated. |
| Final Score: | 36 | I really enjoyed reading the article and I reckon it could get even better. |
| Reviewer: | The Oblong Lobster 22:59, 10 May 2007 (UTC) | |
I would like to take this opportunity to say that in real life I do a mean Cosby impression. No joke, either. -- 
23:21, 10 May 2007 (UTC)