Talk:Wrap
From Pee Review[edit source]
It's not the best I've did, but since I made it and it has somewhat a good concept I might as well pop it on peer review. --~ 
Jacques Pirat, Esq. Converse : Benefactions : U.w.p.
02:39, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
| Humor |
5/10 - Hooyeah, pimps. Fo' shizzle, an' all that. Anyway, there's some good references in there, I particularly like the Beowulf thing. However I'd try and stay away from the whole white rap thing, if that's possible, concentrating more on types of 'wrap'. You know, wrapping paper, sellotape and stuff. |
| Concept |
4/10 - It's got the beginnings of a concept there. It's fairly solid, but as I know nothing about rap (hey man, I was born in Wigan where rap fans are scarce) I didn't find it overly amusing. Sorry, but I'm 'out of touch' with this whole rap thing. |
| Formatting and Prose |
8/10 - Can't really be faulted, for what's there. |
| Images |
N/A - Dunno why, that picture's not appealing to me. But then the article's still in its infancy: some pictoral versions of other types of 'wrap' would be good, especially if you choose to develop the article along the path I have previously mentioned. |
| Final Opinion |
17/30 - Keep the stuff you've got already and develop on it. |
| Comments |
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