Talk:William Butler Yeats
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Reminder for my work.
From Pee Review[edit source]
Humour: | 3 | the idea that yeat's mystic leanings were drug induced is funny only upto a point. i think more slapstick is required to keep the article afloat. more "clever" slapstick (related to drugs and bestiality) in each paragraph needed imo. |
Concept: | 8 | the concept is good. it has potential. what's lacking is mention of some of his contemporaries, like pound and blake -- or hey, even shakespeare or chaucer, to lend it credence and make it seem like an underground cult thing that was in place at that time. |
Prose and formatting: | 5 | prose is ok. cut back on pejoratives, slang and use euphemisms instead to create on air of formality. after all, you are writing about an english poet -- the reader would expect you to respect yeats and his lifestyle (i mean his drugs and bestiality). |
Images: | 1 | no funny pictures? 1 or 2 required. |
Miscellaneous: | 1 | i like pages that use {{Wkipedia}} |
Final Score: | 18 | i think this can be turned around into a great piece with a little more work. considering you have already put a lot of effort in it, it may be a good idea to take it to finish. |
Reviewer: | -- mowgli 08:17, 3 January 2007 (UTC) |
Thanks! --Nightmare975 19:35, 6 January 2007 (UTC)