Talk:The Obese Man's Handbook
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| Humour: | 7.9513 | Though it's funny this articles a bit too relentlessly savage and negative. There needs to be a slightly more subtle build up to each Joke, as if a real fat person had written it and was inadvertantly revaling their insecurity, emptyness and pathetic greed. |
| Concept: | 7 | I like the idea, it just needs a little more expansion to fulfil it's potential. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Well written just needs to be refined a little. |
| Images: | 5 | Needs a few more images maybe some examples of different types of obese people. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | No idea what this sections for. |
| Final Score: | 32.9513 | Overall it's a good start just needs a little more work and some slight expansion. |
| Reviewer: | Winstanley1 13:53, 22 March 2007 (UTC) | |