Talk:The Milwaukee Cheese Bandit

Ur writing is very creative & I see it must've taken time. However, although it is fiction it's not funny. Smart-yes. Contains drama? Yes. Witty-yes. Humorous situations-yes. Funny-nope.

Submit it to 'Pee Review'. Also read 'How to be funny.'.

Here's a thought: Break this article apart into a bunch of little articles-make it a running theme. That's what I did with my 'Sinaloa Dance Cartel' and 'Pineapples/Rutabegas/etc of Wrath'. Doing so, if ur like me, makes it easier to see my errors. But ur definitely on the correct track. Stick with it! Get 200 articles under ur belt and you'll go back to the first dozen and see faults. Keep up the creative work! Smuggler 17:58, 30 November 2022 (UTC)