Talk:The Chaser's War on Everything
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A note from the Author[edit source]
This page sgould only be used for discussion of the article. It isn't a chatroom. Boy, I've been reading far too many Wikipedia talk page articles. --Andy the Idiot 22:35, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
The Chaser's War on Everything[edit source]
I'll drop any formalities and just ask it - could someone please review this page? If you do review this, then I'd like you to give an honourable mention (any joke which made you laugh out loud) and a dishonourable mention (any joke which made you wretch uncontralably and ask God, "why? what did I do to deserve this mockery of comedy?!"). So, yeah. Enjoy. I reviwed something once - I gave it a 16/50. I thought it was out of 20 - anyway, thanx! --Andy the Idiot 22:26, 13 August 2007 (UTC) (Please post the final review on the discussion page of The Chaser's War on Everything article.
| Humour: | 5 | I'm sorry to say that it sounds too much like a guy whinging against a program. To extend this article, I'd suggest you adopt a more neutral position and tone. Saying something is bad again and again is not really as humorous as it should be. Think creatively. |
| Concept: | 4 | A more original stance is needed to make this article better. Saying that The Chaser is bad just isn't that funny. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Some major speling mistaks and some typo.s. |
| Images: | 7 | Not bad. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | The Chaser Rules! Also, lose the Jesus box. It does nothing. |
| Final Score: | 29 | Think creatively. |
| Reviewer: | {Ikabu}BUZZ...FLICK...GURGLE... 07:35, 15 August 2007 (UTC) | |