Talk:The Art of Twangage

Hope no-one minds

But I've fixed up a few grammatical thinga-ma-bobs in this article, if thats ok, namely rewording sentences such as:

• "He demanded he be known how..." under History
• "Under a church he founded..." under Discovery (unless he actually did also found the Church, in which case the sentence still needs to be restructured :P )
• Adding apostrophes to the son's son's son section near the end
• Fixing the spelling of Notable
• Rewording the section about Paul Revere
• There's more, but I can't remember them

--Ceridwyn 23:30, 3 December 2006 (UTC)