Talk:Physical education
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From Pee Review[edit source]
I think the weakest parts of this article are the lead and third caption. Does the unencyclopedic tone help or hinder the article?
This urinal is open. 
Alksub - VFH CM WA RV {talk} 21:08, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | I smiled and chuckled, but there was no LOL moments. Closest to it was the 200 Push-Ups |
| Concept: | 5 | Physical education isn't like Lord of the Flies anymore. Concept is a tad dated, but funny. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7.5 | The unencyclopedic tone definitely helps the article. |
| Images: | 7 | No comment |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | I would add something about over-exertion and death and a coverup by the teacher as something else. |
| Final Score: | 30.5 | Funny article that could use some genuine belly laughs. Sorry, but I don't know how to illicit them. Maybe a section from the nerds' point of view? Cheers! |
| Reviewer: | Ljlego 03:00, 3 March 2007 (UTC) | |