Talk:Pathological liar
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Pathological liar[edit source]
Just finished a massive rewrite on this article, adding pictures and about three times the content. Also, if somebody could provide a larger version of the first pic I have on the page (w/ Jon Lovitz), I'd appreciate it. --Mr.Vib 14:17, 22 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 10 | I laughed all the way through! Nice job |
| Concept: | 9 | A little long, but it's okay |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Good use of cross-outs, (and honestly, I still don't know what prose stands for) |
| Images: | 5 | Pictures suck. Add some. Those out there aren't that good |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Link heavy |
| Final Score: | 41 | Nice article! Remove a few links, add some pictures, and this will much better than the vast majority of gay-joke articles on this site |
| Reviewer: | Fresh Stain Serq Fet of Pokemon (At your service) | |