Talk:Monocle
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I (Leatherboundbooks) accidentally forgot to sign in for my last two edits for some reason, here is proof: 76.190.157.0 19:35, 29 June 2007 (UTC)
Again, just to clarify: 19:36, 29 June 2007 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit source]
| Humour: | 8 | You started it pretty good, I loved the pirates' part and the squinting to look more important. You lost me a bit later on with the town of monocle and modern day use. |
| Concept: | 9 | Nice. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Quite good, the pictures being placed at the odd ends makes it look a bit messy. But just a bit. |
| Images: | 9 | Try and ask someone to chop a monocled pirate, but other than that it's cool |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | perhaps add a chapter of proper ways to wear a monocle? |
| Final Score: | 43 | Nice bit, not too much work needed. |
| Reviewer: | ~ 10:42, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
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