Talk:Lawrence the Cable Gent
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From Pee Review[edit source]
Humour: | 6.5 | Pretty good humor throughout, but there's a lot of room for expansion, especially regarding the "Lawrence the Cable Gent:Chimney Sweep" idea, which I think has potential for a little more than just two sentences at the end of the article. What you've got here is good, though. |
Concept: | 8 | It's a good idea, and what is there so far is good too. Has some room for expansion, though, as I said before. |
Prose and formatting: | 9 | No problems heeya |
Images: | 6 | The first image is really good, the second one is more on the "meh" side. But it works well enough. |
Miscellaneous: | 8.9 | hmm...can't think of anything miscellaneous to say here. |
Final Score: | 38.4 | On the whole, 'tis an enjoyable article, though it's a little on the short side. |
Reviewer: | --THE 17:21, 13 June 2007 (UTC) |
I hope nobody minds that at the moment I'm working on a cleanup of the second image. Like THE, I found it rather....well quite frankly, crappy. I've just got a few edits left to make, I hope the author enjoys it when it's done. -RAHB 06:04, 27 July 2007 (UTC)