Talk:Jared Fogle
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Enjoy...hopefully ~Thehop
| Humour: | 6 | I thought it was pretty funny, but the quotes took some of it away. |
| Concept: | 7 | It wasn't really that original of a concept, but the way that Communism was incorporated was pretty good. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | I notice quite a few capitalization errors, espically towards the bottom. I recommended you get rid of the quote section and put the funnier of the quotes at the top, or move the quote section of it to the bottom(I still recommended getting rid of the less funny quotes). I'd also check for any other grammatical errors while you're at it. |
| Images: | 5 | The images are good, but they weren't really mind-blowing. I think a picture of Fatass eating something and have food smudged all over his face. Maybe, put an image of him in an ice cream eating competion. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | (William Shatner style)So... many... red links! ...Get... rid... of a few... of them! |
| Final Score: | 29 | Overall, you've got yourself a pretty good article. Just do what I suggested(I'd do it myself, but I have reviews to do and I try to keep the Worst 100 lists in line) and you'll have yourself a pretty good article. |
| Reviewer: | --Dexter111344 21:10, 1 June 2007 (UTC) | |