Talk:J. P. Morgan

From Pee Review

Not looking for grading; just ideas from anyone who's partially insane with some business history knowledge or background. --AmericanBastard 09:28, 15 February 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	6	Fair enough. The particularly funny bits are sort of surrounded by not-so-funny bits. The bit about him being born a Jew and baptised a Christian is confusing, and not particularly funny.
Concept:	8	We discussed J.P. Morgan in my history class last week, so I a teensy bit about him. I would have given it a seven here because it's a bit of an obscure topic, but I gave it an eight because the "Morganization" section and the concept of a telegraph search engine business are hilarious.
Prose and formatting:	6	Decent. Nothing particularly bad, but the prose doesn't exactly glow either. The grammar is sometimes awkward, but that can be fixed.
Images:	7	I'll be fair; it's tough to find images that relate to historical business figures. That image at the top is the same one in my history textbook.
Miscellaneous:	10	I'll give you these two points back if you replace the link to consumerism (which I wrote last night when I saw the red link in the article).
Final Score:	37
Reviewer:	The Acceptable  Cainad  (Fnord) 22:30, 15 March 2007 (UTC)

Отличный блог!

Хорошая новость, побольше бы таких :)