Talk:Cheasel

From Pee Review

Another article of mine that I may nom at VFH, depending on my score here at pee review.--<<>> 19:08, 5 February 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	7	Wasn't exactly laugh-out-loud funny, but I'm not the biggest fan of absurdist humour anyway. It made me chuckle consistently, though.
Concept:	8	Would have given you a 10 if the "starving, crazed weasel" wasn't used by Wierd Al already. Still good, though.
Prose and formatting:	3	We get it, "weasel" has an article. Try to link to "ASPCA" or other things besides "weasel" and "cheese".
Images:	7	The first image is very appropriate. The second one is kind of vague, but I can see what you were going for.
Miscellaneous:	5	Aside from the art of making the Cheasel, there wasn't much going on. Perhaps some info on the history of Cheasels, Cheasels in culture, etc.
Final Score:	30	This article certainly has potential, but it's not really outstanding yet. Just expand on the concept and I think you could have a good article in a relatively short time.
Reviewer:	Judgement 22:42, 5 February 2007 (UTC)