HowTo talk:Make a Four Year Old Laugh
From Pee Review[edit source]
read this article one too many times; cannot detect funnyness/unfunnyness anymore. --AmericanBastard 21:41, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
| Humor |
7/10 - This is very good, in my opinion. There's a lot of substance, even if the ideas being explained aren't rocket science, but it's exactly what you'd expect from this sort of article. Good stuff. |
| Concept |
7-10/10 - It seems that the article might write itself, with the predictable 'fart' and 'die' methods. However I like the way you've taken it a bit further, especially with the bungee thing. |
| Formatting and Prose |
8/10 - Nothing wrong with it, tickles my funny bone anyway. |
| Images |
7/10 - Where did you get the third image from? Anyway, it fits very well with the concept being explained there. The second one also illustrates the article well. Good. |
| Final Opinion |
29/40 - Is very good. With a bit of polishing, a couple more methods and another good picture, I'm sure it would do well. |
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