HowTo talk:Buy Life Insurance

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From Pee Review[edit source]

My first original article and would appreciate comments and inputs. --Zeeboy 09:00, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

Has potential but is currently a bit directionless. You need to decide what perspective you're writing from. Are you trying to sell life insurance? Are you trying to persuade people not to buy it? I'm not going to score this article because it would score pretty lowly and I don't want to discourage; it could be good. --Kelpan 16:20, 3 April 2007 (UTC)