User talk:Yodel monkey/Perfect Circle

Alright, like I've said before, it's pretty good. All in all, there's only two real problems I have with it: 1. The "Robot War" part seems a bit random and out of place. I think I understand where you're going with it, but in general, Uncyclopedia articles that have "histories" usually end up not really needing them. Setting up the idea (like you did in the lede there) is typically enough to get the reader ready. 2. Clarify the Asian bit a little more. Make sure that it's clear to the reader that their attempt isn't really a "drawing" of the circle; you could use a physical mathematical formula for a circle or something else to make sure that the reader understands.

Other than that, like I've said, it's a pretty good start. Gonna go look at the other stuff now. --Mr. Monkey Pant-hoot here. 00:20, 10 December 2008 (UTC)