User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2014/Smuggler

From Romartus

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
6/10	6/10	6/10	18/30

Not bad at all from a recent arrival on the Unc scene. Hence the Chuck Norris quote. Quite a breezy read and a commendable effort. The ACME idea does come from the Wile E.Coyote but otherwise, an interesting contribution.

From Shabidoo

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
8.5/10	7.5/10	6/10	22/30

Very creative lines and a good control of humour and pacing. I loled once and laughed at a few lines. As for originality...there are some moments though this kind of article has been done a lot before. But over all I liked the article a lot Smuggler.

creativity: dreamy Frat brother with a wiener harder than Chinese Algebra,

humour:Old chess-playing men at the park will call you 'Loser!, hesitating, and second guessing!, "Forfeit. This works every time", Visualize losing (LOL), so YOU plan...behind, "Can I worsen my position even more by decreasing the effectiveness of a different piece?", He was furious!",

From Napoleon Khan

8/10

From IFYMB!

7.5/10

From TheWikiMan

Good, but you should focus on not writing vanity (this is supposed to be an Unbook or an article about a book, not an ad)
4/10 What I wrote IS about a book. It's a spokesperson's monologue about a book. 64.134.231.120 (talk) 01:01, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

From Sarah

7.5/10

Grand Total

41.5/100