User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2014/ScottPat
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From Romartus[edit | edit source]
| Creativity | Humour | Originality | Total |
|---|---|---|---|
| 7/10 | 6/10 | 6/10 | 19/30 |
Would have thought it might have worked better as the Democratic Republic of Korea's official report of what happened to their team in 2012. Some good ideas but some sections reduced down to a few lines or so.
From Shabidoo[edit | edit source]
| Creativity | Humour | Originality | Total |
|---|---|---|---|
| 7/10 | 9/10 | 6.5/10 | 22.5/30 |
You get high marks for humour as you made me laugh out loud once and got near LOL moments a couple other times. I'm not sure how original the article was...as some moments were fairly expected once the conept of the article was clear. However even then what wasn't original was still done in a sort of original way. There's no lack of creativity in the article. It's a pity it's such a short article and without an image. Nice work for only 48 hours :)
creativity: "an all time high on the North Korean driving license"
humour: Airstrip One, "45 international citizen athlete medals - the latter awarded posthumously" (LOL). "changed since the unfortunate death of their motto manager". "manage to knock out far more "Olympic volunteers"
originality: While it may be expected to take the bourgoisie approach to the world cup it was still done in a very original way. The brainwashing paragraph is about as original as it gets.
From Napoleon Khan[edit | edit source]
5/10
From IFYMB![edit | edit source]
6/10
From The Wiki Man[edit | edit source]
0/10
From Sarah[edit | edit source]
7/10
Grand Total[edit | edit source]
59.5/100