User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2014/NFBell

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From Romartus[edit | edit source]

Creativity Humour Originality Total
6/10 7/10 6/10 19/30

Could have done with an illustration or two. A more traditional Unc entry - a misleading article about an important item of head gear. Some of the ideas seem a bit less developed but did give me a couple of laughs. I am sure it would be a lot better if the writer had more time to work on it.

From Shabidoo[edit | edit source]

Creativity Humour Originality Total
7.5/10 7/10 6/10 20.5/30

You did a pretty good job in only 48 hours. I laughed a couple times and I was impressed by some strong moments of creativity. Work hard on your originality next time...dig deep and try to write not just text thats original but in a style, in a way, with ideas that are simply never done. My favourite line was stuffing hats into cannons and then another hat for gun powder. Though the dinosaur bit was pretty damn funny too. Good job.

Creativity: "The cowboy hat is the Swiss Army Knife of hats." "'purty' hats" "lady gaga and hats".

Humour: "Aspiring cowboys are only allowed to wear plastic or wooden versions." "all the women were admiring Sammy's hot, non-throwable hat" "saving a girl from a burning building and while being chased by a dinosaur" (pretty funny)

Originality: uniweb. If he is also out of gunpowder, he needs another hat. (best moment of the article)

From Napoleon Khan[edit | edit source]

8.5/10

From The Wiki Man[edit | edit source]

0/10

From IFYMB![edit | edit source]

0/10

From Sarah[edit | edit source]

7/10

Grand Total[edit | edit source]

36/100