User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2014/Matthlock

From Romartus

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
8/10	7/10	8/10	23/30

Nice idea but got bogged down in my view by the asides and other comments. Seems a meld of two different approaches, not sure that works so well. Illustrations good which helped me score it higher.

From Shabidoo

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
10/10	5.5/10	10/10	25.5/30

Well you utterly smashed through the barrier on creativity and originality. Basing an article off the inspiration of a where's waldo poster is extremely original and pretty clever too. Doing so in the form of a clumsily rhyming poem with lots of asides was pretty original too. And there is utter creativity dripping out of every line. As for the humour I laughed a couple times and the question marks was close to a lol and it was humerous throughout but I know you can do better. However over all the article was smashing. 25 is a very good result. Thanks for participating and well done. Hilights inlude:

creativity: "And for all that it's worth, is it worth it?" (verry good narrative), All the stars, the stars, my God it's full of stars!,

humour:" "Behold the only thing greater than yourself!", ???? (almost lol), the reference to RAHB

originality:nev-er (playing with the prose),

From Napoleon Khan

8/10

From IFYMB!

0/10

From The Wiki Man

0/10

From Sarah

6/10

Grand Total

39.5/100