User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2014/Colin
From Romartus[edit | edit source]
| Creativity | Humour | Originality | Total |
|---|---|---|---|
| 7/10 | 6/10 | 7/10 | 20/30 |
Funny, I did see a play about someone with incontinence a few years back. That was in Italian. So I could suspend belief to see this one receive a lot of positive awards. Humour is a bit of a gross out for me but that is the point I guess.
From Shabidoo[edit | edit source]
| Creativity | Humour | Originality | Total |
|---|---|---|---|
| 9.5/10 | 9.5/10 | 7.5/10 | 26.5/30 |
Absolute high marks for creativity and humour. You made me laugh out loud three times which is rare in a short article (though some how common in the happy monkey competition). Your putting together J. Alexander and M. Broderick was genius and the introduction of breast milk and diaper wearing waiters was stellar. You really fulfilled the challenge with this article.
creativity: mid-20s crisis. "gender fluid adopted mother". "he really let the shit hit the fan on a busy night." "writing short plays on the wall with his own shit".
humour: "dressing up like a baby, sucking cocks, and shitting his diapers." "he's almost entirely sustained through her breastmilk " (LOL). " until Jason Alexander and Matthew Broderick run out of breath." (LOL) "highly derivative" (LOL).
originality: The curtain drops, and the two proceed to fling fecal matter into the first few rows of the audience until everyone files out of the theater and the lights dim. (that's about as original as you get).
From Napoleon Khan[edit | edit source]
0/10
From The Wiki Man[edit | edit source]
0/10
From IFYMB![edit | edit source]
0/10
From Sarah[edit | edit source]
7/10
Grand Total[edit | edit source]
53.5/100